In an attempt to keep up my poetry, I’ve started checking out blogs that give out prompts on a regular basis. This is my first attempt at a 3 Word Wednesday (3WW).
Tomorrow
My breath catches, heartbeats scatter
at the thought of what a far away tomorrow may bring:
you and me
breathing as one
scattered minds coming together…
tomorrow, tomorrow.
Words: breath, scattered, tomorrow

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January 23, 2008 at 10:44 pm
paisley
“there’s always tomorrow… it’s only a day away…..”
i couldn’t help myself… i am forever breaking out in show tunes… and damn some of them really itch!!!!!
nice to meet you cat…..
January 23, 2008 at 11:04 pm
Lauren
hey, this is charlieseros from xanga…just wanted to say hi! hope all is well!
January 23, 2008 at 11:14 pm
Sandy
Excellent poem, CC.
Welcome to 3WW.
S
January 23, 2008 at 11:34 pm
Lauren
yep! i am still trying to figure the whole blogger thing out. i will be posting similar to my xanga on here, in fact, i just put up todays post….i went to comment you on xanga and saw you were on here now, so i decided to revive my blogger….lol….
January 24, 2008 at 12:26 am
TC
My fingers are crossed that tomorrow comes someday for you…
Welcome to 3WW!
January 24, 2008 at 12:27 am
pjd
I like the “faraway tomorrow”… it has a nice lyrical quality, and it is the crux of the poem. Happy 3ww.
January 24, 2008 at 3:57 am
tumblewords
Nice post! Welcome!
January 24, 2008 at 6:36 am
LittleWing
hmm, that was good….tomorrow breathing as one …
January 24, 2008 at 7:50 am
Herb Urban
Great poem. “Scattered minds coming together”. Isn’t that the truth when love finds you.
Welcome to 3WW.
January 24, 2008 at 5:39 pm
gautami tripathy
Welcome to 3WW! You have arrived..:D
if tomorrow comes
January 25, 2008 at 8:59 am
Princess Pointful
So very sweet!!
You’re getting me excited for your trip…
January 26, 2008 at 6:10 am
Silverstar
Beautiful romantic poem.:)